Author's Comments:

Ccs1989, 26 Dec 2005 10:56 am

Merry Christmakwanzaka! Sorry for all the text, but I tried to make it readable and interesting. This is one of my favorite pages art-wise.

And Merry Day-After Christmas/Merry whatever holiday you celebrate!

User's Comments:

Idiotface, 26 Dec 2005 01:59 pm

fuckin A

Mazoo, 26 Dec 2005 03:19 pm

Score! The Detective is back! :)

Great job with the bodies under the sheets! The bird's-eye-view of that panel works very well with the content.

Happy-post-holidays! :P

flamepkp, 27 Dec 2005 09:52 am

wow, that last panel just makes me see all the improvement in your comic.

Radmetalmonk, 27 Dec 2005 09:39 pm

nice ass ass 4 asses are better than 3 and a pocket of musical wings

Guest, 27 Dec 2005 09:55 pm

Toughy I FOUND YOU haha took me awhile after DD went down can't wait to see the re-vamped comic in all its glory. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

Guest, 28 Dec 2005 11:20 am

Hmm Since I think you wanna shoot for the best I will just critique you to help you out. In the first panel the head shape is alittle off. In the second panel the bodies under the sheet don't look like bodies. I think there should be more shadows there to show that there is something under the sheets. But panel three is pretty much perfect.

Ccs1989, 30 Dec 2005 11:13 am

Toughy- Hey cool, thanks for stopping by! Yeah this revamp will continue to be much better than the original.

Latest Guest- Head shape...yeah I suppose it's a bit off. As for the bodies, I see what you mean. But I like some of the abstract stuff. Oh well, experimentation doesn't always work out perfectly. Thanks for the critisism.

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